literature

Bisexual Family

Deviation Actions

SarahTriceratops's avatar
Published:
3.9K Views

Literature Text

Just because I see myself wearing a white wedding dress
Doesn't mean I see myself with a prince
Even though I plan on getting married
Doesn't mean it'll be a man, what about a woman?

I see the day I'm giving birth
A cute little girl
But what if she has two mommies?
Or my son has double soccer moms?

Which one of us will walk our girl down the aisle?
No daddy around
Would she be ashamed to say I have two moms?
Or would she be walking by our side with a smile?

It doesn't matter who I'll marry
Only that I fall in love
I want to find the one I can pamper
Whether their sex is man or woman
It's true, I am pans/bi.
I hope I don't get any hate.
But, I wanted to write this based off of my feelings. :/
© 2010 - 2024 SarahTriceratops
Comments113
Join the community to add your comment. Already a deviant? Log In
PirateHunter4ev's avatar
:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

I really do like this piece, it's one of the only ones I've actually seen on this subject. What really gave me a strong impact was how you started it off nice and certain, throughout the middle you gave it a little more of that worried kind of feeling, then at the end you still assured us you were certain of what you wanted. I'm not bi, but personally I really felt for you here. You put a very good perspective on a very touchy subject, and I think you really earned a good critique on this one. Good job!