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Cotton candy hair,
Beautiful girl
Shiny green eyes
Melting my heart
A day at a time

Love letters,
Sent through the mail
Gifts for my girl
A pillow in return

A bit of distance
Soon to end
Holding me close
Something to look forward to

Craving your lips
Wanting your kiss
My bed is empty
Big enough for two

Love,
Buried deep under fear
Something I find hard to accept
Loving someone of the same sex

You tell me not to be afraid
The voice of an angel
Is oh so convincing

Your arms spread like wings
Warming my heart
Almost ready,
To be who we are

A kiss from you
Something that is a trigger
My body would tremble
Maybe even shiver

Princess,
You will be mine
Our love,
Can last forever

Just like in the movies
And all the love songs
Your smile will be real
You'll get what you desire

Our bodies will be together
Like ours minds have been,
All along,
My beautiful lesbian lover
A poem about the girl who is deep in my heart.
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milkykitsune Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Just ignore the dumb homophobic assholes <3 Your poem was so beautiful I love it so much.
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mediasploshion Featured By Owner May 29, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
so beautiful and sweet
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SarahTriceratops Featured By Owner May 30, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you :heart:
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clairholm Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2015
Sarah it is from the heart and that's what poetry should be. People who can't move past the great poets of the past are like people who deny anything except classical music has artistic merit. There's a word for them...relics. Your poem speaks to me from your heart and that is art. Thank you for sharing it!
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ZelenaraTheNeko Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
This is so pretty -3- <3
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thefoxysquirrel Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
Pure drivel. It is all content focused and  there is not even a smidgen of intentionality or thoughtfulness with regards to the use of poetic devices. This is the written version of motel art. It is all about content, and there is no attempt to display mastery or any kind of skill with the medium.

"look at the pretty picture!" = "aww! look at the cute poem by the queer... it's soooo DEEP."

I refer you to Yeats, Cummings, Whitman, Donne... poetry should make an attempt to use all aspects of language to support its themes and meanings. This is why poetry has died... ill informed people such as yourself and your "fans" are completely ignorant of  what true poetry is capable of achieving. It requires mastery of language, syntax, and metaphor. To you and those of your ilk, poetry is nothing more than the emotional regurgitation of a tortured soul, a place for outcasts to express themselves... well, i suppose it has become that.

The masters of poetry were masters of language itself and they strove to utilize all aspects of their language. To the poet, words were precise surgical tools, the page an operating table. Their aim was to give a definite feeling, mood, idea to the listener. You cannot disagree. Read the masters. Take note of their rhythm, rhyme, diction, syntax... you know, the things you didn't think about ONCE while "composing" this tripe.

Btw... I do hope you get the help you need for your sexual problems. God speed.
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SarahTriceratops Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I wrote this poem when I was 16. I don't believe any of the legendary poets you mentioned wrote their best work at 16. I also do not care about your opinion on homosexuality. 
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thefoxysquirrel Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
HAHA! I can guarantee they were waaayyyy ahead of the curve at least.

Btw... Alfred Lord Tennyson was called a master of poetry while still a teenager.... :)

Again, best of luck to you with your condition.
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thefoxysquirrel Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
I am very sorry for your condition. I truly hope you receive the help you require. God speed.
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thefoxysquirrel Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
Ignorant of what? I know exactly what I believe and why.

Bigotry? You call it bigotry, I call it discretion.

We all judge the behavior of others. Is rape wrong? Yes. You see? You judge behavior too. We simply draw different boundaries. My boundaries are those set forth by God. Yours come from.... who and what exactly? Your rock solid "gut" feelings that homosexuality is fine? Because of course, feelings are unchangeable and always correct... 0_o

I know why I believe what I do. Do you know why you believe what you believe?
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SarahTriceratops Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I don't have a condition, but you clearly do. Your condition is ignorance and bigotry. 
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thefoxysquirrel Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
Ignorant of what? I know exactly what I believe and why.

Bigotry? You call it bigotry, I call it discretion.

We all judge the behavior of others. Is rape wrong? Yes. You see? You judge behavior too. We simply draw different boundaries. My boundaries are those set forth by God. Yours come from.... who and what exactly? Your rock solid "gut" feelings that homosexuality is fine? Because of course, feelings are unchangeable and always correct... 0_o

I know why I believe what I do. Do you know why you believe what you believe?
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clairholm Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2015
You know what God wants how? Because he talks to you? Or you read a translation of a translation of a translation over 2k years old and it contains all the truths you need?

You sir, are a troll.  memeburn.com/2010/10/dont-feed…
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SarahTriceratops Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Yes, I do know why I believe what I believe. I personally believe in science which has proven that homosexuality is indeed natural. 
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thefoxysquirrel Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
Proven? Simply because it happens in nature? Lol

So does shitting everwhere, cannibalism, incest, eating ones own young... all happens in nature. Kids naturally bully each other, steal, are rude, etc, unless they are taught otherwise. All is done "naturally." Simply because something happens naturally does not make it right. so.... what is "right"? It certainly isnt simply what is natural...

Lol. Your scientific proof is airtight 0_o

Again i assert.... you have no idea why you believe what you believe.
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thefoxysquirrel Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
I would argue homosexuality is CLEARLY HARMFUL to all involved. Do some studying on the devastating physical effects of that kind of sex, AIDS, the social obstructions a queer faces, the effect homosexuality has on the society... its all bad. Just have an open mind and do some honest research. One of the hallmarks of a failing society is the open acceptance of fags. It's well documented history. If you don't believe me, don't worry... we'll feel more and more of the effects in our U.S. society shortly. And I will be here to say "I told you so!"

Secondly, I openly admit that I appeal to the Christian God for my moral code, which clearly condems homosexuality. There is nothing illogical about this. I believe there is a God, and his law is the ultimate truth, the ultimate code. He condems gays, therefore gays are condemned. This is a rational system of belief, even if you don't believe in a God and believe I am wrong, this does not mean my reasoning is irrational.

As for you... to what authority do you appeal to? If you do not appeal to a God, or believe there is no God at all, then there is no ultimate accountability, no ultimate truth. Therefore, no belief system, no moral codes, no actions, nothing, is better than an another. So oppressing gays, not oppressing gays, rape, love hate.... nothing matters. What makes discriminating against gays (which I openly admit I do) worse than not doing so?

I would really like an answer to this, because as of yet, no one has even attempted to answer my question regarding morality without God. So again... why not discriminate against gays? Why is this wrong? You can't simply talk about "harming others" or feelings, etc. Because again, if there is no ultimate truth or accountability for our actions... no action is inherently better than another.
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le-sosie Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2014  Hobbyist
Fun fact: straight people get STD's too.

How about you "just have an open mind and do some honest research"? I think you might benefit from that.
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katleidoscopic Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Of course the motive behind all this was God lmao

oh internet
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HanaRenee Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2013
wow. very nice
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AnotherViolaDream Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
That beautiful poem needs more favourites! Clap 
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MyLittleSquirrelGirl Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Very amazing. 
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SarahTriceratops Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you 
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MyLittleSquirrelGirl Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Welcome.
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we-were-left-behind Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2013  Student Writer
This is beautiful, your wording is so simple but your love is evident and powerful. Great work :)
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SarahTriceratops Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much :)
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X-Wide-Awake-X Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2013
Pure poetry...
Absolutely amazing!:D
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SarahTriceratops Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Well thank you :)
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X-Wide-Awake-X Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2013
No problem:D
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Bruised-Bones Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
This is great!
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SarahTriceratops Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you (:
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Kittyskittles Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2013
this is amazing <3
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SarahTriceratops Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks (:
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Kittyskittles Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2013
Your welcome :D it made me smile so thank u :)
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SarahTriceratops Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Well I am glad (:
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Kittyskittles Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2013
hehe ^^
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CutToTheSex Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013
Beautiful poem.
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SarahTriceratops Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks (:
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hermafrodite Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
i dont get why pepol have to mean to me for likeing girls when i dont feel like a girl maybe its the mental man thing idk but still why are they so mean
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SarahTriceratops Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I don't know :/ people are cruel!
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DisneyAnimation7 Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2013
Beautiful! :heart:
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SarahTriceratops Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so very much <3
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DisneyAnimation7 Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2013
You're very welcome.
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W14C-TheCaptain Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This is so sweet and beautiful ^-^ its actually makes me wanna cry... :hug:
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SarahTriceratops Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Awh, thank you so much. I am glad you like it!
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hushed-lullabies Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
oh gosh this is so cute and sweet :3 <3
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